On page 138 I don't get what David is suppose to say.
(Quote) David had the box open and was already sifting through the pieces. "Aaaa a gou wwwone, Wobbad."
What is he suppose to say??????????
I think the author should put ( ) beside Davids parts and write what he actually is trying to say TO MAKE the reader MORE CLEAR!!!!
Sunday, October 31, 2010
Thursday, October 28, 2010
What do you think??????????
On pages 121 to 123 when Bryce told his mother about the egg situation, I thought it was kind of weird because instead of his mother being really mad and shouting at him, she kisses him on the cheek!
(Quote) "I'm very glad you told me about it." She kissed me on the cheek.
What do you think??????????
(Quote) "I'm very glad you told me about it." She kissed me on the cheek.
What do you think??????????
Wednesday, October 20, 2010
Hey Flipped group!!!!!!!!!!
What did you guys think in your mind when you were on the bottom of page 25 and the text said "When the bus dropped us off that afternoon, Juli was gone and so was half the tree. The top of the branches, the place my kite was stuck, her favorite perch-they were all gone."
I personally thought it was scary for Bryce and he actually felt sorry for Juli even though he'd always hate her, because the tree she'd always loved was all gone.
(p.s. sorry this is only on page 25 I should of posted this earlier)
What did you guys think in your mind when you were on the bottom of page 25 and the text said "When the bus dropped us off that afternoon, Juli was gone and so was half the tree. The top of the branches, the place my kite was stuck, her favorite perch-they were all gone."
I personally thought it was scary for Bryce and he actually felt sorry for Juli even though he'd always hate her, because the tree she'd always loved was all gone.
(p.s. sorry this is only on page 25 I should of posted this earlier)
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